2021年11月6日雅思作文考試真題及范文

2021年11月6日雅思作文考試真題及范文

Task1:柱圖

Task 2:Nowadays,people use social media to keep in touch with others and be

aware of the news.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.

本周考題及分析

More and more people use social media to keep in touch with people,news and

events.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

這道題也屬于經(jīng)典題重現(xiàn)了，social media&Internet是一個(gè)非常重要的母話題，同學(xué)們

一定要針對(duì)該類題月積累足夠多的觀點(diǎn)庫(kù)和地道詞組。道題的問(wèn)題類型‘優(yōu)點(diǎn)是否大干缺

點(diǎn)’，同學(xué)們需要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：

1.因?yàn)閱?wèn)題中的advantages&disadvantages都有復(fù)數(shù)，所以同學(xué)們必須優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)各寫至

少2個(gè)點(diǎn)

2.outweigh需要同學(xué)們把優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)進(jìn)行比較，有下列兩種方式：

-優(yōu)點(diǎn)*3＋缺點(diǎn)*2/缺點(diǎn)*3＋優(yōu)點(diǎn)*2（多的多寫一個(gè)點(diǎn)）

一優(yōu)點(diǎn)*2+缺點(diǎn)＊2＋結(jié)尾段寫一個(gè)比較句（為什么優(yōu)點(diǎn)/缺點(diǎn)更重要）

一般情況下，小編是推薦第二種寫法的，因?yàn)榈谝环N寫法需要同學(xué)們寫5個(gè)點(diǎn)，這樣考試

的時(shí)候壓力會(huì)很大。而第二種寫法只需要在最后一段寫一個(gè)相對(duì)固定的比較句就能拿到這道題

的outweigh分?jǐn)?shù)了。

那么，帶著上面這些要點(diǎn)，我們一起來(lái)看范文吧！

范文鑒賞

More and more people use social media to keep in touch with people,news and

events.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

滿分詞匯：

access/inaccessible v./adj.接觸/無(wú)法接觸

current affairs n.最新資訊

in the globe prep.世界各地

privilege n.特權(quán)

up-to-date adj.實(shí)時(shí)的

selectively subscribe v.選擇性訂閱

minors n.青少年

misguide v.誤導(dǎo)

positively informative adj.能提供正面信息的

discretion n.審慎

hate comments n.噴子言論

論點(diǎn)1:Mass media allows the public to have access to current affairs in the globe,

which used to be a privilege for only social elites a century ago.

展開(kāi)1:Compared with information spreading in the past,which were normally

inaccessible by ordinary people,people nowadays can acquire virtually any up-to-date

news using no more than a mobile device,or even selectively subscribe to their favorite

ones in various mass media platforms.

論點(diǎn)2:It is normal for the general public,especially minors,to be misguided by

the information delivered by mass media.

展開(kāi)2:Although most of mass media is positively informative,underage

audiences,who rarely have any discretion,are easily to fall victim to some of the

misleading information from mass media.such as commercials or hate comments on Internet media.

雅思寫作中需要避免的詞匯

1)累贅：It is essentially very hot in Hangzhou now.

2)累贅：Travelling is so good.

3)累贅：Doing this job is really hard for me.

這些句子都比較啰嗦，表達(dá)不明確，用詞普通，這種疊加的想強(qiáng)調(diào)程度的，應(yīng)該用正式的、強(qiáng)烈的高級(jí)詞匯進(jìn)行同義替換，比如：

1)推薦：It is scorching in Hangzhou now.

2)推薦：Travelling is wonderful.

3)推薦：Doing this job is difficult for me.

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